as far as i am concerned, i think as a successful restaurant manager, first of all, i must pay more attention to my staff and myself appearance. there are five aspects i had to control it:

my opinion as hereinafter:
as far as i am concerned, as a successful restaurant manager,i think,first of all,more attention should be paid to the staff's appearance,including myself. there are five aspects that should be controlled:

i'm a freshman.and i'm interested in english too.